For Immediate Release
ABC Real Estate
123 Creative Way, Logan UT 84341
(801) 555-4567
Investing in Real Estate the Safe Way
ABC Real Estate Introduces Renovative Way of Selling Real Estate in Cache Valley
LOGAN, Utah—ABC Real Estate is introducing a new, innovative, beneficiary-directed way to handle real estate. Preston Parker, the president of ABC Real Estate, announced today that he is looking for investors for his new system.
“This system of handling real estate is so effective," said Parker, "because it is a time-proven method that will work in any market." The system involves up to four investors: the person selling the home, the person volunteering his/her credit to purchase the home, the person making the down payment, and the person paying the monthly bill. Before any action is taken, everyone invloved puts an agreement in writing about who is responsible for what.
According to Parker, since the system was first introduced in Salt Lake City eight years ago, there has only been one case where one of the investors was unable to comply with their responsibility. "This system is awesome for the market," said Parker. The minimum investment varies on individual cases.
For more info, contact Kevin at (801) 555-1986
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I really like the quote. I don't like how you said Preston "announced today that." Get rid of 'that'.
ReplyDeleteI think that your headline is too long. Your sub-headline is perfect!
Good luck